User blog comment:AJ1776/AJ1776's alternate RDR story: An Outlaw to the end/@comment-1265875-20120424170716

It's not bad, but it's a little thin. Especially for the fact that you kill Uncle in it. Again, not telling you it's bad, just that you need to put some meat on these bones...

Alternate ending and Uncle still dies? Poor guy can't catch a break. ;)

oh and: "He ran outside to the front of the house, upholstered his belt and put it near his waist..."

up·hol·ster 

tr.v. up·hol·stered, up·hol·ster·ing, up·hol·sters To supply (furniture) with stuffing, springs, cushions, and covering fabric.Did John really have time for this when there are three guys outside and the house is on fire?

Kidding, obviously! :D