Thread:Wagwan piffting23/@comment-37649881-20190407132539/@comment-37649881-20190407133624

OK. I appreciate the response. I was just wondering. I have professional writing, editing, and publishing experience, and it just seemed like an arbitrary change. I was always taught to avoid unnecessary adverbs and commas and to use strong nouns where possible, so that's why I wrote it the way I did. But I'm fine with it the way you have it. Thanks again.