User blog:Jim Logan/Red Dead Return

Red Dead Return is a story made by Jim "The Vital Element" Logan, and is a direct sequel to Red Dead Revised. It takes place days after the original story, and is planned to be through both John and Jack's perspectives.

Chapter 1
It had been a week since John left his son at their old home in Beechers Hope, he had been riding for what seemed forever, running for what seemed forever, and finally, after years, after what he thought his old life would leave him be, he had to defend his home against Edgar Ross. John remembered clearly, teh image of his son shooting Edgar, and the smile Jack had on his face at seeing Edgar die. John couldn't help but smile at how much Jack had grown to resemble him. John stopped through Armadillo, took a three hour nap, changed into his formal coat, and again started riding, when he made it to MacFarlane's Ranch, John dismounted his horse, and saw Bonnie, working hard with a couple of people John never met to drag a horse into the barn, as it was about to storm. John saw she hadn't seen him yet. He sneaked up behind her.

John said "Boo!"

Bonnie turned,screamed and as their eyes met, she hugged him.

Bonnie said "Mr. Marston, how great it is to see you!"

John said "Please, Mrs. MacFarlane, call me John."

Bonnie said sadly "I am sorry about Abigail."

John replied "Thank you Bonnie."

After the predicted heavy rain was just starting, Bonnie kissed John, passionatly.

After pulling apart, John asked with a laugh "Been waiting for that havent you?"

Bonnie shrugged "Maybe."

Before another thing could be said, a Zombie came running torward Bonnie with the speed of lighitng, John, quickly withdrawed his LeMat Pistol, and gunned the sucker down.

John muttered "Here we go again."