User blog comment:Lush1998/Red Dead Redemption: Blackwater Massacre/@comment-1265875-20120510174100

Lush, these are massive blocks of text that you should try to break up into structured paragraphs just to make it a little easier to read.

Espcially start dialogue witha new paragraph so it doesn't get lost in the rest of the text.

Decent little tale, tho'... :)