User blog comment:JohnMarstonJR/Red Dead Short Story./@comment-1743369-20120105020520/@comment-1743369-20120105142850

Just a few words. You spelled familiar with two l's, you spelled eventually as evently, challenged was spelled challengened, forcing you wrote as forceing, weapon was written wepon. I realize any of these could just be typos, so I don't think too much about them when reading, but a writer should always want their story to look as neat as possible.