User blog comment:AJ1776/AJ1776's alternate RDR story: An Outlaw to the end/@comment-1265875-20120424170716/@comment-10278667-20120425034614

If people are not open to criticism, they shouldn't post their stories on a public forum. This isn't a place where people can write anything and get a pat on the back. If you write a story and put it on the wiki, people will criticise it. There's no need to get at Jack with these "give him some slack" comments when Jack was just offering helpful criticisms.

As for the story, AJ, it was pretty good. I don't see much of a difference between this and the actual ending (Ross betrays, agents attack, Uncle still dies, John splits with his family, albeit it's in the house rather than the barn). I look forward to seeing where you take this story with part 2.

Cheers!