User blog comment:AJ1776/AJ1776's alternate RDR story: An Outlaw to the end/@comment-1265875-20120424170716/@comment-1265875-20120426154413

No, I wasn't kidding at all.

Hobbes was correct, there isn't much difference between the two endings so far, so you need to flesh this out a bit...

And I don't know how to stop myself from giving constructive criticism, so if you'd rather not hear any, don't ask me to read your stories. ;)

Cheers!