User blog:Jim Logan/Red Dead Revised

Red Dead Revised is a fanon written by Jim "The Instant Classic" Logan. The name "Revised" means the revised ending to "The Last Enemy That Shall Be Destroyed and the story that follows.

Chapter 1
John had been fighting for so many years, weather against the Law, or against his own former brothers-in arms, John had never stopped fighting, even with his his surrogate father's death. The Law wouldn't leave him alone. John knew what had to be done for his family to survive. John sent Jack and Abigal away to flee while John stepped outside the barn to see Edgar Ross and half a dozen United States Army soldiers pointing their guns at him. John in his last act of defiance, using his special skill, shot down, two soldiers and shot Edgar himself in the neck, just before getting shot in the leg himself. Seconds later, Edgar was up, dying but up.

Edgar attempted to shout "Kill him!"

He heard three gun shots, but he felt no pain, nothing, he looked up to see Leigh Johnson and several police running torward the battle site.

Johnston shouted "Stand down! This man, John Marston has been given a full pardon on behalf of the United States Government!"

John looked up in shock. John looked over to see Edgar fumbling to grab a gun from a soldier.

John heard another gunshot, but not from a soldier or one of Johnston's men. John turned to see Jack with John's Explosive Rifle, smoking. John turned to see Edgar fall to the ground, dead.

Jack grinned and said "Self defense."