Thread:Ulanth67/@comment-32769624-20180724082700/@comment-4090850-20180729113601

Well, glad you enjoy the game; it's one of four favorite games of all time, personally.

It's good to see someone passionate about the game, and I'm reviewing your edits at the moment. They quite informative, but you need to try and lessen writing your additions in a subjective or speculative, or even novel-like, tongue. ("Frankly, considering its firepower and brief reloading time, this rifle may well be unappreciated and therefore underutilized in the game."; "as if uncertain about the location of the hapless victim about to be hanged.") So in future, please refrain from writing in such manner.

A second issue would be just a little case of bloating, as was in the Weapons in Redemption article, as you can see in my re-edit here.

Aside from that, just another small thing, but I didn't any edits under your name on either of the Wikis you mentioned; out of curiosity, were you editing as an anon, or with another, previous user profile?

Anyways, happy editing and I hope you'll take my points to your heart as you continue editing here. Your help is appreciated and if you have any more questions feel free to ask me or Jack.