Thread:Raziel Reaper/@comment-2008429-20190320204110/@comment-2008429-20190321184548

Thanks I apprechiate it. I did notice however that since the last time I looked at the article. Someone added that John’s daughter died of cholera. This is actually an old debunked rumor. John Marston’s Daughter is only directly mentioned twice in two bits of dialogue by John. And once by Javier indirectly.

John mentions her to Bonnie. “I had a daughter but she died. Years before that I rode in a gang.”

John says to Luisa “I have a son at home and a daughter in heaven.”

Javier indirectly mentions her when he threatens John by saying “I hope you and your wife and children. Rot in hell!”

Those three bits of dialogue are the only time John’s Daughter is ever mentioned in the entire game and never once is a cause of her death stated. They only ever mention that she died years after John’s life in the gang. Which only gives a very loose tiemframe of her life and death. Never how or why she died.

With the articles factual integrity in mind, I strongly recommend removing the mention of cholera as her cause of death. I would apprechiate it given that we locked the article to prevent speculative information from ending up on the article. Other then that specific stipulation. Everything else on the article checks out to me. I have no further comment other then saying thanks for taking my suggestions. It’s always nice when admins are open to having legitimate dialogue with their users concerning the content of articles.

Thanks.