User blog comment:AJ1776/MY SHORT STORY: THE BUSTLE OF CAMP/@comment-1743369-20120106023912/@comment-1743369-20120109142120

Sorry for the late reply. Mostly, you should focus on learning better about where commas and apostrophes should go. If you're serious about writing, then you could buy a cheap book about grammar and brush up on these things. If this was a one time deal, then I wouldn't worry about it.