So I'm writing a book! It is heavily inspired by RDR2. Their white Dove, Singing in the Wind - Google Docs There is the link. Rate it in the comments. It is unfinished so pls comment what I should improve.
@Svqarityy the perfect roast
Arthurs bounty is 5000$ and by 2022 that would be about 207,879$ (CAD) or 156,795$ (USD). Dutchs bounty is actually 10,000$ or 326,162.64$ today!
@Smileypictures thanks for the review
@RushW thanks
@RushW this is also my first story that I am working on that isn't a comedy so I'm new to this.
First, thank you for the review.
Second, most of these questions will be explained further in the story.
Third (answering questions), Rain is not Chinese, Rose is. Rains mother was a prostitute and the guards control the names of the people and the guards hated Rains mother so they didn't give them a name. The field is a bit closer to the town because the slave owners sometimes sell the potatoes. When on the journey after coming across the wagons, (this is cut) they actually ride quite far. The boat actually will be making a stop somewhere in west Europe. The town is undecided I just might make one up. Jose actually isn't the boat owner but a traveler who has taken the job as a janitor on the boat. They are speaking English and sometimes Russian but it doesn't say when they are speaking one language or another (I need to work on that lol). Rain is actually non-binary but throughout the story they will get called by different pronouns.
I forgot I mixed up "based" with "inspired" the story is inspired by RDR2.
Thank you so much for the review.
So I'm writing a book! It is heavily inspired by RDR2. Their white Dove, Singing in the Wind - Google Docs There is the link. Rate it in the comments. It is unfinished so pls comment what I should improve.
@Matipereira oh sorry I thought it said 1897 I'm dumb
@Dodarkillen "You're mean!" -Jack Marston
In 1887 John was 24 and Arthur was 34.
@Levi de Santa Micah is Micah.
@MfwSunnyOmori it was Micah who made him a bad person so I disagree. It's your opinion tho
I think most of us can agree that the Aberdeens are disgusting. NOT SO FUN FACT: They are actually caniballs and inbreed.
@Dodarkillen it's not like anyone asked you to click on this post
Maybe wait a day or two and then replay.
Replay it again.
Go onto Jacks page on the rdr wiki (which you are on now) and when the pictures of him show up click on 1911.
Jack will appear with a cursed smile.