While I have mentioned it in the previous message, I would like to reinforce it once more: capitalize the first letter of your sentences. Every time you begin a new sentence, capitalize the initial letter of the sentence's first word. I noticed in your edits after the earlier message that at the very least you started capitalizing names, but every time you begin a new sentence, don't forget to capitalize as I instructed you.
Wikis are to be written formally and professionally. I appreciate your contributions to the Wiki, but please keep this in mind when editing.